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Is Your Business Blog Too Sloppy or Too Dressy?

October 13, 2015 By Linda Dessau

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Authenticity was a common theme at the recent Content Marketing World conference. Prospective customers must be able to see and connect with who you really are, in order to build a relationship that may eventually lead to them hiring you.

New business bloggers often feel tempted to try and sound smart in their blog posts so they can impress readers with their expertise.

Dressed up writing might look like:

  • Passive language rather than active
  • Complex terms instead of simpler, more common phrases
  • Jargon that only other industry experts will understand
  • Impersonal, “stuffy” tone of voice that feels distant from the reader

At the other end of the spectrum are the business bloggers who are far too quick with the Publish button. Pressured by time (and maybe an unrealistic publishing schedule), they’re more concerned with getting it done than the impression they might be making on their audience.

While done is definitely better than perfect, a poorly written blog post can have a far more negative impact than waiting another day or two to proofread your post.

Sloppy writing might look like:

  • Spelling and grammatical errors
  • Lack of focus and no clear point
  • Topic is unrelated to the core theme of the blog
  • Readability problems like run-on sentences or paragraphs that are too long

How to dress your business blog for success

Think of it this way:

Would you leave your house for a business meeting wearing pyjamas and slippers? Probably not, since this wouldn’t be very professional.

On the other hand, you certainly don’t have to pour yourself into an evening gown or tuxedo every time you step outside your door. You won’t be comfortable, people won’t know how to relate to you, and your message will be lost in the distraction of how you’re dressed. And the very same things happen when you try to dress up your writing.

Instead, take the time to run a comb through your blog post and deal with any glaring errors. You can look the part of a professional expert, just don’t try to be someone you’re not.

This post was updated from Is your writing all dressed up but going nowhere?

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Filed Under: Editing Tips, Writing Tips

How to Write Helpful Instructions in Your Blog Posts

September 22, 2015 By Linda Dessau

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“Youtility is marketing upside down. Instead of marketing that’s needed by companies, Youtility is marketing that’s wanted by customers. It’s massively useful FREE information, that creates long-term trust and kinship between a company and its customers.” – Jay Baer

The message was loud and clear at the recent Content Marketing World conference in Cleveland: Quality content can make a real difference if you focus on what you’re giving, not what you’re hoping to get.

When you teach your readers how to do something, it demonstrates three very important qualities about you and your business:

  1. You want to help
  2. You can help
  3. There is more help where that came from

Unfortunately, confusing or poorly written instructions won’t convey those principles.

If you don’t deliver the promise that the reader will learn “how to ….” whatever you’ve stated in your title and description, you will only turn away someone who could be a potential customer or referral source.

What do your customers need to know?

To choose the best topics for your how-to posts, answer these questions:

  • What are the most frequently asked questions you answer in a typical week, either over the phone, by email, or in person?
  • What common mistakes do you see people making in relation to your key blogging topics?
  • What do you wish your customers already knew how to do when they hired you?

5 tips for writing clear instructions

  1. Limit each list item or sentence to one action
  2. Use a numbered list if the number or order of steps is important; otherwise, use a bullet list
  3. Give your readers an idea of how long each step might take
  4. Separate any commentary about the topic so it’s not mixed in with the list of instructions – add it to the introduction or conclusion instead
  5. Test your instructions thoroughly – walk through them several times from your reader’s perspective; if you can, find volunteer testers from your target market (give yourself a week or so to collect their feedback and revise your post)

Inspire your readers to act

Whether or not your post outlines specific tasks, you can always provide some actionable steps at the end to help your reader apply their learning, such as:

  • Rehearsal: Ask your readers to practice a new behavior, habit or perspective. Suggest how many times per day or week they should do it, and in which specific situation(s).
  • Documenting: Ask your readers to keep track of their progress; give them a checklist to mark off their actions or ask them to record it in a journal.
  • Reporting: Ask your readers to share their results with you, your community or an accountability partner.

For personal growth topics, consider other options such as reflection (to ponder or consider the new idea and how they might integrate it into their lives) or journaling (to write about the topic using questions or prompts you provide).

When you take the time to write clear instructions, you increase the chances of helping your reader succeed with whatever problem they’re trying to solve. After getting such good results from your ideas, they will come back for more. And when they’re ready to seek help to go to the next level, they’ll have the confidence to choose you.

What’s something you’ve taught a customer or prospective customer how to do? Will you use my tips to put those instructions into a blog post? Send me a link, I can’t wait to read it!


This post was updated from The Art of Writing Clear Instructions (or How to Tell People What to Do) (Dec 2010). Some of the material was adapted from Chapter 23 of The Customizable Style Guide for Coaches Who Write, which has now been incorporated into the second edition of Write Your Way to More Clients Online.

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Filed Under: Writing Tips

Are List Posts Still Effective on Business Blogs?

September 1, 2015 By Linda Dessau

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As saturated as the web is with list posts today, for most of us lists still hold great value. As business bloggers, lists help us organize our thoughts and get them on paper. For our readers, lists are a predictable and enjoyable way to learn and gather information.

Doug Kessler sums it up beautifully in this tweet from the Content Marketing World Twitter chat (#CMWorld):

A2: Headlines with numbers (7 Ways…) signal important things: utility, a quick read and some structure. Readers like these! #CMWorld

— Doug Kessler (@dougkessler) April 21, 2015

(I compiled 10 key benefits of lists for both bloggers and readers in my own list post back in 2011. See The Top 10 Reasons We Love Lists.)

What about the people who hate lists?

As helpful as I think list posts are to both readers and writers, Kaleigh Moore thinks they’ve outlived their usefulness. She writes, “The trouble with these [top 10] posts is that they strive for quantity—not quality—by providing only surface level information rather than taking a deep dive into one particular point.”

Yet that’s exactly why I recommend new bloggers start with top 10 posts. Instead of facing a blank page with the pressure to astound the world with your brilliance, you can break down your years of experience into some quick, bite-sized tips that will really help someone who’s a beginner to the topic. And these surface-level posts are less intimidating for you to write.

When I’m taking a few minutes to read an article online, I’m not looking for earth-shattering insights or a deep dive lesson that requires a big investment to read and implement.

For me, sometimes those 10 points in someone else’s article are just what I need to validate something I already know, remind me to practice something I used to do but got away from, or reinforce my trust in a prospective service provider.

For one attendee of my recent “How to Write Your First Four Blog Posts” presentation at The Creative Space, list posts are a big turn-off. She said there are so many list posts online today they’ve completely lost any meaning or appeal.

I reassured her that if you hate lists, you don’t have to write list posts! You won’t feel good about it and that will come through to your reader. But you can still use the structure of a list to focus your thoughts and move the writing process along.

Popular personal finance blogger Trent Hamm says he starts every post as a list, even though he doesn’t necessarily present the ideas that way. After identifying the questions people are asking about his topic, he says, “I try to make a big long list of potential solutions to the problem. From there, I’ll start winnowing the list.”

Writing your list

When you’re stuck about what to write or concerned about staying on track, block your concepts into numbered points or sections, and keep these three things in mind:

  1. Use sub-headings and/or list titles to distinguish each separate point and help your reader navigate the page.
  2. Limit each section or list item to one point.
  3. Make sure every point delivers on the promise of your article’s title.

If you’re a more advanced writer, or you’ve been blogging for business for several years, by all means you can challenge yourself with Kaleigh’s blog post format ideas. But if you’re just starting out or you’re struggling to keep blogging week after week, stick with what works – and list posts work!

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Top 10 Blogging Tips for Professional Services

August 12, 2015 By Linda Dessau

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When a prospective client is looking for the professional services you provide, they may not be ready to talk to you yet. Instead, they may browse your website to find out more about you.

While the other sections of your website can show that person who you are and what you do, your blog shows them just how much you know.

Reading your blog gives clients a non-threatening way to interview you at a distance. If they like what they see, it will give them the confidence to contact you directly and take the next step.

Here are 10 blogging tips for attracting new clients for your professional service business:

  1. Plan first. A blogging plan is the best way to build confidence in your ability as a blogger, and in blogging’s effectiveness to grow your business. Outline why you’re blogging, your goals, and how you will achieve them. Detail when and how you will write, polish, publish and promote your posts, and define your blog’s key categories.
  2. Commit to a set of core topics. Hone in on 5-7 themes that intersect between your areas of expertise and the interests and concerns of your readers and prospective customers. Do not publish anything that doesn’t fit precisely into one of those categories. (You can add categories later, but think carefully first.) Blog categories focus your efforts and make it easier for both you and the reader to return week after week, knowing exactly what you’re doing there.
  3. Tap into a team. If a topic is outside your immediate scope, but important to your audience, you can still include that category. Simply create a list of people you can invite to write a guest post or be interviewed. Consider partnering with other professionals to share your resources. Decide who can best help you plan, produce and promote your blog posts.
  4. Ask and listen. You don’t have to guess about the topics your target audience is interested in, you can ask them! From a formal questionnaire to a casual question in passing, find out what’s on their minds in relation to your business. You can also listen in the background by searching for key phrases on social media platforms and reading comments and questions about your topics.
  5. Be a beginner. You’re an expert. That’s why people hire you. Yet it took years for you to build up your knowledge base and the collection of experiences you draw on every day to help your clients. Be sure your writing is accessible to someone who is brand new to your topic and your industry. Don’t use jargon or acronyms, or if you do, include a clear explanation that any novice can understand. Constantly put yourself in the shoes of a beginner and review what you’ve written from that perspective.
  6. Make your blog posts easy to read. Treat your readers like clients and give them a good experience of being with you. This can mirror the positive way you’ll treat them when you work together. Include plenty of white space on the page, by keeping paragraphs short, using sub-headings and/or lists. Include a compelling title and an eye-catching photo that help your reader connect to the topic on an emotional level.
  7. Proofread and pause. Walk away from your writing for a few minutes (at least) or a few days (ideally). You’ll be amazed at how many improvements you’ll find by giving yourself this space. Read your post out loud to catch errors your brain will skim over when you’re reading onscreen.
  8. Promote and repurpose your posts. As much as you’d like to think people are visiting your blog every morning to see what’s new, that’s highly unlikely. If you want them to see a new post, you must let them know it’s there. Use email newsletters (manual or RSS, social media updates, your email signature, and individual messages to people who would benefit the most. Schedule additional social media messages for the future. You never know when someone new will come along who needs to hear the exact message you just wrote. When you write posts on related topics (which you will, since you’re following my suggestion in #2), link back to this post to keep it alive.
  9. Monitor your responses and results. Janet Barclay of Organized Assistant® says there are three ways blogging gets business results: authority (i.e., recognition as an expert in your field), numbers (email subscribers, website traffic, social media followers, etc.) and dollars and cents (new clients, product sales). Be clear about the results you’re looking for, so you can track what’s working well and keep doing it.
  10. Keep blogging. Blogging only works if you do it consistently. While blog posts can and will draw new readers and results for years, when you stop blogging or blog only sporadically, it can raise questions about your professionalism and dependability. No one is perfect, myself included, so if you DO fall off the wagon, just jump back on as soon as you can.

If your business offers a professional service, blogging can tell prospective clients a lot about you. They will see how much you know, how generous you are with that knowledge, and how skilled you are at using your knowledge to help people just like them.

Use these 10 guidelines to make the most of this powerful marketing opportunity that is accessible 24/7 from your website, not to mention from any device connected to the internet.

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Filed Under: Attracting Local Clients, Blog Planning, Blogging Basics, Blogging Consistently, Editing Tips, Writing Tips

Who is the Blogger Behind Your Blog?

June 3, 2015 By Linda Dessau

group-of-faces-textIn a guest post for Above the Law, LexBlog founder Kevin O’Keefe writes that for lawyers or other professionals, “blogging works because of your ability to establish an intimate relationship with the reader.”

He explains how that bond is formed: “You, by making yourself vulnerable and available to help people. The reader, by discovering someone with passion, experience, and care who can help them.”

Each party must open themselves up to this intimacy. Professionals, entrepreneurs, and solo business owners who blog become a combination of three types of bloggers:

  1. Passion bloggers who document their journey, share their experience with others, gain support and accountability, evangelize what they’re passionate about, and/or teach and help others.
  2. Thought leaders who identify and explore the most important research, news, trends and issues in their industry. O’Keefe is a perfect example, and he points out, “You discover new interests and grow as a professional through blogging.” As long as you’re enthusiastic about your work and your industry, he writes, “How can you not find things to blog about?”
  3. Subject matter experts who explain complex ideas and guide customers to either do a simple task themselves, or feel more confident about working with a service provider.

It may not always be comfortable to be transparent and authentic when you write. You open yourself up to judgment and there will definitely be some people who don’t like what you say and think.

Yet as a business blogger, the truer you are to your personality, the easier it will be for the right clients to find you.

Read Kevin’s post at Above the Law: Blogging Is About You, The Blogger, Not The Copy.

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Filed Under: Blogging Basics, Writing Tips

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